You are completely correct. I think I was worrying more about what was to come in the story and how he felt after the fight. I should have done a better job at highlighting the fight and turmoil they would both be feeling at that moment. When I get some more free time I will edit it and let you know that the change has been made. Thank you for your input.
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Coveryournuts on Chapter 1 Fri 17 Apr 2026 10:31PM UTC
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