Ssss (Guest)
on Chapter 3
Sat 18
Apr 202602:48AM UTC
The writing quality is insane.
You don’t see stuff like this everyday fs
Though I would’ve liked an Auro echo after that speech and his realization.
Would’ve made for an interesting relationship after Auro would’ve found the truth.
Also, all of his shadows, shades & cores is far too much for the beginning of the story. I hope you don’t give him all his demands, or, honestly, any of them. Sunny with all his experience as a sleeper could likely take on something akin to a Fallen Beast on his own and win 90% of the time, which would already greatly enhance his rate of growth, also not including his weaving skills.
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