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  1. fire1 on Chapter 1 Mon 20 Apr 2026 03:25AM UTC

    Good 1st chapter.

    I love that your not using AI, It is getting way overused, and stories are always better from a human.

    The only critical thing I would say is that you need to work on your spacing. And that's more format thing not a writing thing. Some of your paragraphs ended up squishing together and that could have been AO3 when you uploaded the document.

    Very much looking forward to reading more.

    Last Edited Mon 20 Apr 2026 03:25AM UTC

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