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  1. OMG this fic is just everything, I love it so much. The love, the longing, the shame and guilt, the wonderfulness of Adrian to accept this despite it also being taboo on Erid too, the relief and joy?! It’s just so emotional and well written.
    Since you asked for suggestions, I’ll share one. So last chapter you wrote about Adrian wanting to lay eggs/have babies with Rocky but Rocky pushing that idea way out of guilt and shame. Now that all is right with them and they are together with Grace too, a scene with the three of them together and Rocky and Adrian laying fertile eggs and Grace fantasizing he’s contributing too would be so nice. Also in addition to that a scene/scenes where they tell people about how they’re all mates now and deal with a variety of reactions including negative ones but they stand up for each other/are brave for each other 🥹❤️ I would love that, if you wanted to write something like that. And maybe they could try to get officially/legally married/bonded if that’s a thing on Erid but it’s not allowed both due to the double mating and Grace being an alien and that could cause some angst and sadness but then they just do it themselves unofficially instead and it’s really lovely and sweet 🥹 Anyways, just some ideas to consider, no pressure ❤️

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