I love Booth's little inner cheers and such (the crowd goes wild-) They're delightfully in character and add some nice variation. Lovely!
I love the introduction to his house- makes rewatching the movie all the more painful. Thoughtful, well written- fantastic!
I like how you've changed some of the dialogue and how things went down to better match your story- subtly in some cases- it's super interesting to read and shows off a great understanding of the characters and how they navigate this world differently.
The anti-burn cream is canon. I don't care. Every time I rewatch the movie I think of this scene. Fantastically brilliant- and great characterization!!!!
Throughout this entire fic, the imagery is completely amazing. It's so lovely to read- I want to chew the words like a yummy mochi icecream or a caramel. It gives the whole chapter a lovely reading feel to it- as well as a unique reading experience!
Great chapter! One of my favourite fics from the fandom<3
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DancingLifeboat on Chapter 1 Sun 22 May 2022 06:09PM UTC
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